Carpe Diem Daily Haiku: Winter Shower

Every day a new challenge at - Haiku Challenge

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cold winter shower                                                                                                            sudden warmth on back of neck                                                                                          like my first winter kiss

About yarrpirate

Writer and coppershop owner ~ I travel four corners of the earth to trade in copper. But I also travel because I write. The obstacle is the path.

27 Comments

  1. Oooo…that made me tingle most pleasantly :-)

  2. Oh! Nice surprise at the end . Loved the little shiver that went with it too! :)

  3. Oh those winter kisses :) Thanks for sharing.

  4. Oooooh, I like those kind of kisses!
    Winter Drizzle

  5. Your poem is a delightful surprise – like the kiss on the back of the neck can be!

  6. nice.. i can feel that shrill and goose bumps when this happens to me

  7. The great thing about this three-liner is the surprise ending. Delightful!

    First Snowfall

  8. Welcome Yerpirate on Carpe Diem … this first post of you here on Carpe Diem is stunning, what a nice image you paint here with so few words. Thank you for being part in Carpe Diem, hope to see you again.

  9. wow!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
    buona giornata
    a te e family
    vento

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