”There’s one left.”
”Yup.”
”Well that’s a pretty big problem, don’t you think?”
”Why’s that boss?”
”Well, that mean’s one of them survived. He didn’t eat it!”
”Not necessarily boss.”
”Not necessarily? And why would that be ‘not necessarily‘ then?”
”One of ‘em could’ve had two, or more than two boss.”
”I thought you said they had one each?”
”Yeah boss, I thought so too.”
”You know what this means, don’t you? One of those vampires is around somewhere. I mean whose idea was poisoned dried blood brownies anyway?”
”Only poisonous for vampires boss.”
”I know that!”
”Try one boss?”
Oh, I love that last line! The dialog’s great, but the finish really puts the icing on the cake.
Your comment is so nice – thanks very much, and thank you for noticing that detail..
A dark , bloody twist. Love it.
Wicked! A few words to truly get one’s teeth into
Oh dear…she as a touch of a vampire about her!
Amazing you got so much suspense and wit into 100 words!
I love this. What a story, in such a few words.
Well that is a lovely comment – thank you so much for taking the time to provide inspiration like that!
Really nice! A twist was added each moment I progress and it made me more curious to know more… signs of a good writer.
Thanks very much – good news shortly – got delayed a touch with new job offer in different country.
That’s great! I hope they gave you a good offer.
Take your time, mate!
Thanks! Offer…well, a Bahraini friend of mine, with interests in France..
lol. that was fun..Vampires eating dried blood brownies
Yes! I thought it might be a treat of vampires..
hahaha
Cute 
Thanks for that! Always appreciate your comments very much…and…I tried the soup…um..its back to the drawing board again I think! Still have to work on it, but I’m afraid I didn’t quite follow your instructions very well – as beautifully laid out as they were..will do better next time!
Oh no, I’m sorry about your soup. I told you to follow my instructions! kidding
hopefully you get it if you ever decided to try it again.
I will try – definitely – yes, you can be more strict next time you show a recipe..otherwise guys like me just cut corners! Thank you – will get it right…!
Uh oh! I wonder who ate the brownie?
Loved this!
A touch of vampire to you then? Surely not!